i show you my hand.
you read my cards
you see my heart.
flee. run. while i'm gone.
i've been dreaming of
writing a song.
i get my hugs,
but nothing of
the kind my mind
has been trying to find.
you left love behind.
forsaken. you were mine.
words aren't enough, for this sort of stuff.
my eyes speak the best
and my heart says whats left.
just another way to word,
what i felt and what i feel.
confusing the moments
that i thought seemed unreal.
your getting realllly good at this riley.
ReplyDeletei really like Filter, good rhythm
and Your Eyes Were Smeared, 'but a smile shattered her image' and 'a beautiful wreck' - those lines really jumped out to me.
and this one, i like the rhyme a lot. it flows really nicely.
have you submitted any to adagio??
thanks so much laura, no i've been slacking. i've been so busy. i've submitted older ones though :)
ReplyDelete